Best Practices for Achieving Talent Success Maturity

Keeping Candidates in the Loop and Meeting Compliance: Email Templates for Candidate Communication

With insight from

Libby Sartain

Libby Sartain

Former CHRO, Professional Board Member

Libby Sartain is an independent advisor, working with companies on human resource issues. With more than 30 years of experience in human resources, she is also an author and frequent speaker, using her HR leadership and management experience at companies in technology, transportation and manufacturing. She led human resources at Yahoo! and Southwest Airlines during transformative periods. Both companies were among Fortune magazine’s “Best Places to Work” during her tenure. She is the former board chair of the Society for Human Resource Management and is on the board of Manpower Group and is the Vice Chair of the Board of AARP.

With research and insight from Recruiter.com, LinkedIn, CareerBuilder, and Glassdoor.

  • Who it’s for: 
    HR managers, recruiters
  • What you’ll get: 
    Templates for communication to rejected candidates and those you’re moving forward with
  • Why you need it: 
    To improve candidate engagement and boost your employer brand
  • When it applies in the talent success process: 
    After an initial interview and until the job is filled

Positive Candidate Experiences Lead to Better Hires

Keeping candidates informed in a timely and thoughtful manner isn’t just polite — it leads to better hires. From the very start of the candidate process, the way a company treats job seekers sets their first impression of how they might be treated as employees. Giving every candidate timely and respectful updates on your decisions along the way will send the message that your company is the right one to consider and maybe even to work for.

Candidates Overwhelmingly Say a Negative Interview Experience Can Damage a Previously Trusted Company’s Reputation *

83%

Candidates Overwhelmingly Say a Positive Interview Experience Can Bolster a Previously Doubted Company *

87%

Consistently offering a great candidate experience is crucial to hiring, developing, and retaining more A-players — the employees who have the DNA you would love to replicate to create sustained success. Learn more about A-players and the Talent Success Model.

“In today’s volatile economy, positions and needs change seemingly overnight, and so do people’s skill set. The person you reject today might be the person you desperately need next year. With the rapid shifts in the business world, anything can happen to anyone, including you. The person you just interviewed could be sitting on the other side of a desk tomorrow, interviewing you. Maximize your allies in your industry and keep your detractors to a minimum. Even the candidates you don’t hire can be your allies if you treat them right.” — Melana Doyich, Veteran Recruiting and HR Management Expert, via AskTheHeadhunter.com

Treating Candidates Like Valued Customers: Formalize Your Process

Candidates — like valued customers — want and need honest, helpful feedback. And just as with customers, following up with candidates as they move through your recruiting process helps ensure a better experience. Formalizing your communication process guarantees that every candidate knows where they stand every step of the way.

Build a Process for Prompt Follow-ups

We’ve become a society of instant gratification. Your colleagues in sales have learned that customers and prospects won’t wait long to get an answer from a salesperson. Recruiting needs to adopt the same mindset to protect your company brand and not run the risk of losing potential A-players to companies that are faster to respond.

One respected study, reported in Harvard Business Review and later supported by other studies, found that sales representatives who contacted leads within one hour were seven times more likely to have a meaningful conversation with a decision-maker than those who waited longer.

Follow up with every candidate no later than 24 hours after:

  • A phone or face-to-face interview (or 24 hours after a round of interviews, if multiple people talked with the candidate)
  • A decision about the person’s candidacy has been made
  • A decision about the job they’re applying for has been made (even if they don’t get the job)

“Why 24 hours? At the most basic level, it’s a matter of common courtesy. You need to remember that any rejected candidate is potentially a customer down the road and possibly a candidate at another time. You need to foster that relationship and show them respect. Even if they were not the right fit this time, they might be in three months or a year.” — Libby Sartain

Use Templates and Technology for Efficiency and Consistency

A good middle ground between writing every candidate communication from scratch and having them automatically generated by an impersonal software system is to have templates written for your company that cover a few basic candidate situations. We offer examples in the next section of this article.

Templates not only save you time. They also:

  • Avoid sending impersonal and emails that will be perceived as inauthentic and insincere, hurting your employer brand and costing you A-players
  • Guarantee that you consistently present your employer brand and the voice and culture of your company

Use Technology

To make the job of preparing and sending the letters easier, a good applicant tracking system (ATS) will include a feature for you to create your own letters — including using your own templates — and to schedule when a hiring manager or recruiter should automatically be notified to send a follow-up communication.

Be Open, Be Helpful, Ask for Feedback

Again taking a cue from marketing — which really is what attracting good candidates is all about — the added value to your company when you personalize candidate communication even slightly can be immense. The key is to treat the candidate as if you (or your son or daughter or other loved one) were getting the letter, email, or phone call. In other words, be polite, but honest. Be supportive, and be clear. Make these as personal as possible. There is sometimes a concern from recruiters about bandwidth on these calls (talking to over 40 rejected candidates), but if done right, they can be a strategic advantage to your recruiting pipeline in the future.

One way to present this kind of more personal information to candidates, which is a different approach for many hiring and HR managers, is using what’s called the SPA treatment, reported on the website Reruiter.com:

  • Strengths: Tell the candidate what they did well in the interview or what their strengths were.
  • Proposed Alternative: Tell the candidate what they could have done better or what needs to improve.
  • Acknowledgment: Thank the candidate for their time.

Honest, helpful, and timely responses that ask for feedback show that your company values candidates and how the job market perceives you, and that you appreciate each applicant’s time and effort.

Rejected or Moving Forward: An Approach for Both Paths

The next section of this article offers templates for emails to candidates you either reject or hope to move forward with at different stages of the recruiting process. Creating a good candidate experience either way is the goal.

Rejected Candidates

No one likes to deliver bad news, and the job of contacting rejected job candidates is often passed down the ladder, with little guidance other than to tell the candidate, “Thanks, but no thanks.” Going a little further is not legally required, but the Society for Human Resource Management (SHRM) offers good reasons to do so.

“Because a negative applicant experience could turn off future applicants and customers, employers should respond in a professional manner to all applicants, thank them for applying, and do so in a timely manner,” says the SHRM article “Rejecting Candidates: What Should an Employer Tell a Candidate Who Is Not Selected for the Position?”

Reasons for going the extra step with rejected candidates, according to SHRM, include:

  • Candidates may be pursuing opportunities with several employers, and awaiting closure with your organization may cost them another viable position.
  • No response at all is frustrating and disheartening, and it can result in a negative perception of your organization.

Here are two ways to give feedback that is supportive, without worrying that you’re violating employment laws or putting your company at risk of being sued for hiring discrimination:

Give a neutral, nonspecific reason.

Give a standard response, such as, “Thank you for applying, but we have decided to pursue other applicants,” or some variation.

Give a specific reason or coach the applicant.

This could entail anything from, “You were chewing gum and texting during the interview,” to, “Your responses to several interview questions did not showcase the leadership capabilities we are looking for.”

Many recruiters are understandably concerned that any reason they give for rejecting a candidate could be interpreted as discrimination. You can avoid any potential for such claims by:

  • Communicating your decision briefly
  • Giving objective reasons why the person did not get the position
  • Avoiding any comments that relate to protected classes of employees as spelled out by federal labor laws

Federal law prohibits discrimination in hiring based an applicant’s race, color, religion, sex (including gender identity, sexual orientation, and pregnancy), national origin, age (40 or older), disability, or genetic information.

Libby Sartain

Libby’s Take

I used to tell my recruiters, hiring managers, and peer interviewers to treat candidates like they were a family member. “How would you like your son or daughter treated if they interviewed? How would you like them treated if they were interviewed but not selected?” From that concept, our recruiters added a special element to the recruiting process:

  • Any internal candidate who wasn’t selected could arrange a meeting with a recruiter who would give honest feedback to the candidate. The feedback would include how to interview better next time, what skills they should work on to be a better fit for the role they applied for, or other career advice.
  • External candidates were also offered a chance to have a recruiter call to discuss further.

Isn’t that how you would treat a family member?

What to say and not say:

Do:

  • Be sincere, and professional. Remember, this is business to you, but very personal to the candidate. It is their livelihood.
  • Let the candidate know as soon as you have made that decision; don’t wait until the end of the process.
  • Thank the candidate for the time, effort, and research they put into learning about your organization. It is a sincere compliment to your organization that they want to be a part of it.
  • Describe specifically the main factor or factors that contributed to your decision, but keep it high level. Let them know where they had weaknesses in their background or resume. For example, not enough experience in XYZ. Or better, another candidate had stronger background in that area. (Caveat: If the candidate seems overly argumentative, do not use specifics.)
  • Encourage them to apply for another specific position, if applicable. Make sure they have the skills for the position and that you think they would have a good chance of landing that role.
  • Recommend experience they could get or areas they could work on to be a better candidate. For example, if they blew the interview, give them an example of how they could do better next time and how they could prepare. Better to say something like: “It didn’t appear that you did much preparation for the interview,” rather than, “You did not interview well.”
  • Aim to keep your rejected candidate as a future candidate, or at least a future customer of the business. (Send a discount coupon, or something to connect them to the business, if appropriate.)
  • Make the call short and sweet.

Don’t:

  • Beat around the bush; come straight to the point.
  • Use the word “rejected,” but rather “selected another candidate.” Choose your words carefully.
  • Lead them on.
  • Mention anything that could be deemed discriminatory or is open to an argument.
  • Act like you are the candidate’s friend.
  • Leave a text, voicemail, etc.

— Libby Sartain, Former CHRO, Professional Board Member

Candidates You’re Moving Forward With

After you’ve sourced and screened promising candidates, it’s important to keep them as engaged as possible. By definition, top performers are the candidates most likely to have multiple options, which also makes them the most likely drop you as an employer of choice for any number of reasons along the journey.

Positive feedback, delivered quickly, is vital to keeping A-players engaged with your opening, your process, and your company. For the best candidates, a thank-you call or personal email directly from the hiring manager or any other employee the candidate met with is a great added touch that people won’t forget.

Putting It All Together: Candidate Follow-up Templates

Below are templates for four sample candidate follow-up letters based on the advice and insight from the previous sections of this article. Remember, it’s not only the details of the offer that matter. It’s important to follow your company’s messaging and communication guidelines to ensure that it communicates your brand and speaks authentically to the candidate.

Using templates for candidate follow-up communication helps you consistently apply recruiting best practices to be able to hire and engage more top performers more easily and effectively, and polish your company brand as an employer of choice. Variable content for this candidate, gathered from the spreadsheet, is highlighted in yellow.

Rejected Candidate: No Interview Was Offered, the Position Is Still Open

Dear Candidate’s First Name,

Thank you for your interest in the position of job title with name of your company. We were fortunate to have many well-qualified candidates. After careful consideration, we regret to inform you that we are moving forward with other candidates whose qualifications are better suited for the position and our needs at this time.

Thank you for your interest in name of your company. We wish you all the best for the future.

Regards,

Name
Title

P.S. If you have a minute, we’d appreciate hearing your impression of your candidate experience with name of your company here. You can send me a reply via email or visit our career portal and leave a note there.

Rejected Candidate: An Interview Was Conducted, the Position Is Still Open

Dear Candidate’s First Name,

Thank you for taking the time to interview with us about the position of job title with name of your company on date of interview(s). It was great for the team to meet you and get to know you a little better.

We were fortunate to have some very well-qualified candidates, and you were among the few invited to be interviewed. It was a tough decision, and we regret to inform you that we will not be taking the process further with you for this position.

Despite the strength of your one or two of the candidate’s strengths here (e.g., experience, education, decision-making skills, specific technical skills, good interviewing ability, etc.), we will be moving forward with a candidate who one or two skill sets or abilities the job requires or a better candidate has.

We will keep your resume on file. You’re a great candidate and may fit our needs later.

Thank you for your interest in name of your company. We hope you’ll keep an eye on our jobs page.

I’m happy to answer any questions you have and would appreciate hearing your impression of your candidate experience with name of your company. You can send me a reply via email or visit our career portal and leave a note there.

Regards,

Name
Title

The Position Is Still Open, the Candidate Is Still a Strong Contender

Dear Candidate’s First Name,

Thank you for taking the time to speak to us about the position of job title with name of your company. We’re fortunate to have several well-qualified candidates under consideration, including yourself. I just wanted to let you know personally that we are still very interested in the possibility of you continuing your career at name of your company. We hope to make a selection shortly.

I’m happy to answer any questions you have at any time. You can send me a reply via email, give me a call, or visit our career portal and leave a note there.

Regards,

Name
Title

The Position Has Been Filled, You Want to Keep the Candidate in Your Talent Pipeline

Dear Candidate’s First Name,

Thank you for taking the time to interview with us for the position of job title with name of your company on date of interview(s). It was great for the team to meet you and get to know you a little better. We were fortunate to have some very well-qualified candidates, and you were among the few invited to be interviewed.

Despite the strength of your one or two of the candidate’s strengths here (e.g., experience, education, decision-making skills, specific technical skills, good interviewing ability, etc.), we have moved forward with a candidate who one or two skill sets or abilities the job requires or a better candidate has.

It was a tough decision and we want to encourage you to apply to other positions with name of our company in the future. We will keep you in mind should a position that matches your expertise open up. We think you’d be a great addition to the company.

Thank you for your interest in name of your company. We hope you’ll keep an eye on our jobs page.

I’m happy to answer any questions you have and would appreciate hearing your impression of your candidate experience with name of your company. You can send me a reply via email or visit our career portal and leave a note there.

Regards,

Name
Title